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finndevries
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Posted on Sat Oct 20, 2018 3:14 pm

Hi   I (finndevries) apply for lordship with my town Zotan-Lufatar which is located at x 83616 and z 52736   if i get approved i will be Nex´s second count to make him baron.

Thx for reading :3



Last edited by Presence10 - Sun Oct 28, 2018 12:12 pm
Presence10
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Posts: 151
Posted on Sun Oct 21, 2018 11:38 am

 First Impression: Why is there a boat? The pond youre in is tiny. Dont be afraid to use Angmar blocks or black numenorian either to vary up the dark pallette of Mordor. Which is its biggest weaknesses to builds suffering the same as Dwarf Builds which are primarily just a paste of one block type.

But it looks good overall. Much better planned and laid out

 2 Player Houses; I see only 1 player house. However I assume theres a second where I cannot find it. Both these places need their own banner. [Player + you] on it so they can protect their stuff from other visitors. Both of these are easy fixes so Approved

 Marketplace; Booths should have something to sell. But otherwise it fits.

 Smeltery; Approved

 Pasture; I would like to see fenced in area where your wargs can roam. Personally I would see a larger warg pit being used or something that would suit the giant wolves.

 Training Camp; Looks good; Approved

 Capital Building; Looks awesome; the inside is neat

 Active Player; Approved

finndevries
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Posted on Thu Oct 25, 2018 12:37 pm

i upgraded my Pasture and added a new wall a wargthingy (modified as u will see)

i think this pasture is ready to be aprooved.

thx for reading :3

 

Presence10
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Posts: 151
Posted on Sun Oct 28, 2018 12:12 pm

Approved. Welcome to Lordship