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Wizanite
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Posted on Sun Oct 21, 2018 6:00 pm

My countship name is Burárum.  My knight is KarmaDrake. 

-Wizanite <3

coords r X: 73826 Y: 72 Z: 13829

 



Last edited by Wizanite - Tue Oct 23, 2018 8:46 pm
Presence10
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Posts: 151
Posted on Fri Oct 26, 2018 3:42 pm

This location is in the middle of Mirkwood. There is nothing there.
73826 72 13829

Wizanite
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Posts: 4
Posted on Sat Oct 27, 2018 3:17 pm

im sorry.

its 73826 72 -13829

Presence10
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Posts: 151
Posted on Sun Oct 28, 2018 12:38 pm

 First Impression: You build fantastically; just a few improvements

 2 Player Houses; Approved

 Marketplace; Approved

 Smeltery; Underground smeltery would be better above ground. With the other buildings. Just a small area to keep ores and a nice looking furnace like the ones that spawn with NPCs.

 Pasture; Its very nice; but I would like to see some more natural curves to the pasture. Its very rectangle. But thats an easy fix. Approved

 Training Camp; Approved

 Capital Building; Walls can use some texture variation. Its very single-block type.

 Active Player; Approved

Wizanite
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Posted on Sun Oct 28, 2018 5:31 pm

I made the improvements 

i hope they are up to standard ;3

Presence10
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Posts: 151
Posted on Sat Nov 3, 2018 3:06 pm

 Second Impression: 

 2 Player Houses; Approved

 Marketplace; Approved

 Smeltery; Looks a lot better Approvedt

 Pasture; Approved

 Training Camp; Approved

 Capital Building; Looks better but still think it needs something else. It just feels like it is missing something.

 Active Player; Approved

Wizanite
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Posted on Sat Nov 3, 2018 8:48 pm

Any ideas?

Presence10
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Posts: 151
Posted on Sun Nov 11, 2018 8:05 pm

Hmmm sorry it took so long. I feel the main criticism I see is that its so much wood elven brick that it just seens to be lacking detail. Look at other blocks that could fit into it.

Maybe it needs more details nearby. Include a few paths and some decor and I will overlook the Capital Requirement.