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RainyZachmando
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Posts: 6
Posted on Mon Nov 12, 2018 10:48 am

the cords are x:67104.106 z:58372.25.

 

I do have 2 player houses but can the fort next to my base be considered a player house because they built it?



Last edited by RainyZachmando - Thu Nov 15, 2018 8:31 pm
Presence10
Web Developer
Posts: 192
Posted on Mon Nov 26, 2018 2:45 pm

First Impression: You are >Way< above troop limit. Your area has over 300 entities in it. Banners do count as these entities so I do consiuder removing some if not most of them. Chess Pieces also count as entities.

Secondly; I know its fun to have silly builds; but I dont think having the Melon-House inside the walls is good. It really is an eyesore.

Lastly; some of the Roofs in your area need some work. The slope of 1x1 is pretty bad looking and detracts from the overall quality you have going.

 2 Player Houses; They are marked out; but I would like to see better quality housing. Works regardless

 Marketplace; I cannot find any marketplace.

 Smeltery; Looks good; I like the smoke stack sorta go with it

 Pasture; I see no area marked as a Pasture

 Training Camp; Approved

 Capital Building; Inside needs to be fleshed out; you can see dirt on the ceiling, As a building tip. You can use Carpenter Blocks and Shift-Right click in Glowstone to be light sources. Could change out all the Dwarven Lights for these blocks. As covering dirt is relatively easy; I will approve the build, just fix it as soon as you can.

 Active Player; Active On Discord

 

[[If I did miss the ones in red; post their coordinates for me. Just do 1234 56 7890. I do not need decimal places.]]

 

RainyZachmando
Regular
Posts: 6
Posted on Tue Dec 4, 2018 12:12 pm

Pasture is x:67126.05 z58283.37

Marketplace X:67091.81 Z:58309.94

Does chess stuff count as entities.

RainyZachmando
Regular
Posts: 6
Posted on Tue Dec 4, 2018 12:41 pm

I took my flags down so I hope the entities are gone if not its the natural npcs.

Presence10
Web Developer
Posts: 192
Posted on Sun Dec 23, 2018 2:34 pm

Regular chests do count as entities. But theyre not the problem. 

The marketplace's roof should look nicer.
The pasture is not a pasture. Those are animal pens. The pasture should be larger. Think of in terms of horses and animals needing plenty of space to move around.

RainyZachmando
Regular
Posts: 6
Posted on Sun Dec 23, 2018 11:52 pm

I expanded the Pastures and redid the roof to the market.

Presence10
Web Developer
Posts: 192
Posted on Sat Jan 5, 2019 7:44 am

You've not fixed the Melon House nor the Capital Building which insides can still show dirt on the ceiling. Seems like a skeleton of the build instead of a  full build.