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(Barracks rebuild) I apply for barony with my City ( 83688 63 52753). (the barracks got relocated behind the mountain south of the small lake. Smeltery got updated aswell as the pasture got a few upgrades (although mordor doesnt rely on a pasture) Nex and Hades are supporting me. If you cant find a specific building u can dm me per discocord since i did hide some of them well xD thx for reading and as always, have a nice day pres
So few things; The wall needs some work. Its very plain on the outside and doesnt reach below the water. Second, most places seem half-built and some need to be finished. Others do not meet quality standards. Players may be building their own homes but they still need to meet some quality.
3 Player Houses; You have plenty of people. [Not gonna go looking for houses lol]
Market Shoppe; You have no Shoppes
Smithy; Looks fantastic
Stables; I would like the area to have more stalls. The warg Pit can be extended underground which would be interesting.
Barracks; Its a very interesting shape, which I love. However its missing the beds and office for the Captain to sit at. Additionally you need paths marked out for the patrol routes.
60% Residents to 40% Structures; Can definately use more NPC housing It will also help fill out the area.
2 Counts: HadesZues; AngliNex
Active Player; Active
Last edited by Presence10 - Sat Jan 12, 2019 8:29 am
1. I added a Shoppe (as well as i could since idk what that is / google didnt help either) pls dont be too harsh on it ;P 2. Wargpit now continues a bit underground+ new areas for the wargs to live (behind the pit, seperated by a road) 3. Added the office beneath the barracks (path didnt marked out yet since i have to think about where to set it) 4. me and my friend added more houses which fit the standards thx for reading and uh... dont be surprised...my orcs decided that horses > wargs for some reason
Last edited by finndevries - Wed Jan 16, 2019 1:33 pm
Please post coords to new builds like this;
1. Shoppe 123 45 6789
2. Wargpit 456 78 9010
3. Barracks 765 43 1234
This way I can easily see a list, copy and paste the coordinates and review it quick and simple. Rather than flying around searching for each individual place.
Shoppe (as said i have never done that before): 830750 71 52646 Wargpit (Underground): 83677 62 52649 more areas for the wargs: 1: 83663 69 62642 2: 83682 72 52600 Barracks (upgraded with a room for the commander) : 83720 67 52907 Houses were build all over the place i sense a lazy presence ;P thx for reading
Shoppe: Approved. You did not specify what shoppe you wanted, so I made it Saplings. [Shoppe is just an old fashion word for Shop.]
Wargpit: Approved. Sadly I do not have any wargs ready to be sold... So that will have to come at another time. Do they have different speeds and hp like horses?
Barracks: Approved, Please mark paths.
The only thing left for "review" is the 60%/40% thing. I apply for my barony then (since I think that all else is being approved) again thx for reading :3 have a nice day
Since you're turning good as far as I'm aware, I'm not going to bother reviewing this. Thanks for requesting a review, sorry for the verylate response.
Last edited by Froosty11 - Fri May 24, 2019 11:23 am
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