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I want to apply for lordship
My Username is TobiasVjh
Main Building: 110600 80 -15528
Player House 1: 110648,46743 71 -15523,42910
Player House 2: 110631,46114 60 -15523,54011
Smeltery: 110588,26334 80 -15530,61971
Pasture: 110639,99503 68 -15563,41173
Training Grounds: 110628,28830 67 -15479,24592
Marketplace: 110622,93817 79 -15573,71921
I think the biggest weakness is the Walls having a checkerboard pattern. Checkerboards never look good.
Inside the fort; its great. However the floors and ceiling are very lackluster as they are flat. I'd add in archways and some dimensions to them. A bit of design on the floor to break up the sheet of wood.
2 Player Houses; Approved
Traveler's Wagon; Cannot find
Pasture; You have land nearby; this should be above ground or the underground should be larger.
Training Camp; Accepted
Capital Building; Accepted
Active Player; Accepted
Just fix the Pasture, Wagon, and the Checkerboarding across the walls. You should be fine.
i fixed everything
the wagon is at 110686 70 -15512
General feedback: Some of the towers have floating roofs that shouldn't be hard to fix though.
Traveler's Wagon; The roof is very lackluster, maybe use a different material for it and make it less flat to help highlight it as a separate part of the wagon. The shape also needs to be smoothed out a bit, the parts on the sides stick out and appear very weird, changing the roof to overhang it should help.
Pasture; The underground area is still quite small. Just follow what Presence originally said.
You seem to be going in the right direction, so with a few tweaks and improvements you should be fine. You can message me on discord and I can come help with stuff if you need it such as feedback during the building itself.
I'm new to this so if theres any problems with this review I can have someone else check it. I should also note this was done in collaboration with Thesquidychicken.
Overall I think the place is very nice, but there are some flaws which unfortunately mean it cannot be accepted in the state I saw it in.