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I want to apply for lordship
My Username is TobiasVjh
Main Building: 110600 80 -15528
Player House 1: 110648,46743 71 -15523,42910
Player House 2: 110631,46114 60 -15523,54011
Smeltery: 110588,26334 80 -15530,61971
Pasture: 110639,99503 68 -15563,41173
Training Grounds: 110628,28830 67 -15479,24592
Marketplace: 110622,93817 79 -15573,71921
I think the biggest weakness is the Walls having a checkerboard pattern. Checkerboards never look good.
Inside the fort; its great. However the floors and ceiling are very lackluster as they are flat. I'd add in archways and some dimensions to them. A bit of design on the floor to break up the sheet of wood.
2 Player Houses; Approved
Traveler's Wagon; Cannot find
Pasture; You have land nearby; this should be above ground or the underground should be larger.
Training Camp; Accepted
Capital Building; Accepted
Active Player; Accepted
Just fix the Pasture, Wagon, and the Checkerboarding across the walls. You should be fine.
i fixed everything
the wagon is at 110686 70 -15512
General feedback: Some of the towers have floating roofs that shouldn't be hard to fix though.
Traveler's Wagon; The roof is very lackluster, maybe use a different material for it and make it less flat to help highlight it as a separate part of the wagon. The shape also needs to be smoothed out a bit, the parts on the sides stick out and appear very weird, changing the roof to overhang it should help.
Pasture; The underground area is still quite small. Just follow what Presence originally said.
You seem to be going in the right direction, so with a few tweaks and improvements you should be fine. You can message me on discord and I can come help with stuff if you need it such as feedback during the building itself.
I'm new to this so if theres any problems with this review I can have someone else check it. I should also note this was done in collaboration with Thesquidychicken.
Overall I think the place is very nice, but there are some flaws which unfortunately mean it cannot be accepted in the state I saw it in.
I have now fixed everything and want to apply again for Lordship
Traveler's Wagon; Accepted, I think this is fine and fits with the general skill level of your build, its also a tricky thing to build.
Pasture; Denied, the underground area hasn't been expanded from what I can tell, what you have there is a stables. I suggest just fencing up a large area in the flat grass near your place and then decorating it with some form of shelter (such as trees or an open roofed area), some water, hay bales, etc.
Overall: Fix the pasture issue and reapply and you should be good.