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LoL3470
Member
Posts: 1
Posted on Fri Jan 31, 2020 8:25 am

I want to apply for lordship

My Username is TobiasVjh

Lordship Locations:

Main Building: 110600 80 -15528

Player House 1: 110648,46743 71 -15523,42910

Player House 2: 110631,46114 60 -15523,54011

Smeltery: 110588,26334 80 -15530,61971

Pasture: 110639,99503 68 -15563,41173

Training Grounds: 110628,28830 67 -15479,24592

Marketplace: 110622,93817 79 -15573,71921

 

 

Presence10
Web Developer
Posts: 243
Posted on Wed Feb 12, 2020 4:00 pm

I think the biggest weakness is the Walls having a checkerboard pattern. Checkerboards never look good.

Inside the fort; its great. However the floors and ceiling are very lackluster as they are flat. I'd add in archways and some dimensions to them. A bit of design on the floor to break up the sheet of wood.

2 Player Houses; Approved

Traveler's Wagon; Cannot find

Marketplace; 

Smeltery; Accepted

Pasture; You have land nearby; this should be above ground or the underground should be larger.

Training Camp; Accepted

Capital Building; Accepted

 

Active Player; Accepted

Just fix the Pasture, Wagon, and the Checkerboarding across the walls. You should be fine.