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Tom.Trent
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Posts: 2
Posted on Thu Jul 16, 2020 8:31 am

•Capital building - 54090 74 47776
•Marketplace - 54052 74 47759
•Pasture - 54133 74 47771
•Training camp & barracks - 54098 72 47806
•Traveller's wagon - 54055 72 47775
•Player Homes - 54029 72 47778 & 54041 72 47781
•Smith - 54065 73 47789

Players living here -stripy_x_skater, The_Ink_Droplet, Erikmust

I know it's quite small and close together but thats the style im aiming for .

TheSquidychicken
Regular
Posts: 23
Posted on Sun Jul 19, 2020 6:09 pm

First Impression: I wasnt able to tell which building was the capital from the very start, which is a fatal flaw imo. It definitely feels quite empty on the Northern side, but I assume you will be filling it in with buildings. I wasnt terribly fond of the amount of Oak Wood used, but it does have a town feel which is what you were going for. 

One thing I liked: The shape of your buildings. I like the larger portion on top of smaller portion style very much, and I believe if you experimented a bit you could make it work better

One thing to work on: Roofing. Roofing can always make or break a first impression, and the plain triangular roofs are a bit unappealing, try experimenting to see what you can come up with!

Capital: Denied; I would like to see more detail on the outside and on the inside, outside decoration is mostly just the shutters on the windows, without which you would have oak boxes with glass panes; inside just doesnt feel like a capital: first thing you see is a strange row of mithril blocks and armour stands, I would recommend making it feel more like an official building. It feels too small for a county capital, but it should be alright.

Market: Approved; Its not bad, maybe add some crates around for decoration?

Pasture: Approved; Nice little area for the animals, maybe add a water trough?

Training Camp: Approved

Travellers Wagon: Denied; Its not bad, but too much oak wood imo, try adding a canvas (wool) top to it isntead of oak, and it should be approvable.

Player House 1&2 Approved

Smeltery: Approved

Overall:
 Denied. Dont give up! You need only fix a few things, a denial is not a failure, but a learning curve. If you keep going and improve, you will eventually come out the other side as a count ;p Good luck.

 

Tom.Trent
Regular
Posts: 2
Posted on Tue Aug 11, 2020 2:54 pm

•Capital building - 54017 81 47732
•Marketplace - 54052 74 47759
•Pasture - 54133 74 47771
•Training camp & barracks - 54098 72 47806
•Traveller's wagon - 54055 72 47775
•Player Homes - 54029 72 47778 & 54041 72 47781
•Smith - 54065 73 47789

Players living here -stripy_x_skater, The_Ink_Droplet, Erikmust, Reddly

TheSquidychicken
Regular
Posts: 23
Posted on Tue Aug 11, 2020 3:45 pm

Capital Building: Approved

MarketPlace: Approved

 

*Pasture: Denied; Although I approved it earlier, taking a closer look this time, I realized its quite cramped for a pasture, as well as nowhere for animals to get any water, and it has troops, not livestock.*

Training Camp: Approved I did'nt see any barracks here, only the sleeping quarters for the training camp.

Travellers Wagon: Approved

Player Homes: Approved

Smeltery: Approved 

Overall Impression: 
The houses here are quite plain, without windows they would pretty much be triangle roofed oak boxesa dn they have fairly limited interior design. The Capital looks good from the outside, your other houses would probably do good with a bit of wattle and daub as well. 

Overall: Denied