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KevinF1ash's Ice Kingdom Citadel
Marketplace -- 1517 ~ 74 ~ -77204
Traveller's Wagon -- 1493 ~ 64 ~ -77233
Smeltery -- 1565 ~ 70 ~ -77195
Stables and Pasture -- 1529 ~ 79 ~ -77208
Militia Camp -- 1481 ~ 63 ~ -77241
Player House 1 -- 1517 ~ 78 ~ -77225
Player House 2 -- 1528 ~ 93 ~ -77216
Capital Building -- 1533 ~ 68 ~ -77235
Smithy -- 1565 ~ 70 ~ -77195
Last edited by KevinF1ash - Thu Aug 6, 2020 1:33 am
Capital: Denied; The exterior looks quite good, although the interior is lacking; there are many empty areas and some parts where the flooring becomes the same material as the roof and walls.
Traveler Wagon: Denied; I would recommend using a differrent wood type for this so it doesnt blend with the rest of your build, also, its quite cold in forodwaith, maybe add some sides to block out that chilly wind.
MarketPlace: Denied; I like the concept, but I think it feels too cramped, maybe a few more stalls, or a little bit of a more open room
Smeltery: Accepted; Although the floor is still the same brick as the walls and ceiling, and there are torches all over the place I would say fix those two things.
Training Camp: Approved
Player Housing: Approved
Pasture and Stables: Denied; Seems fairly unfinished, the pasture also is a bit too small, and to be honest it feels placed strangely and not accessible to animals
Overall Opinion: I like the city, most of the denials are small fixes, so good luck!