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KevinF1ash
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Posts: 3
Posted on Wed Aug 5, 2020 8:19 pm

KevinF1ash's Ice Kingdom Citadel

Marketplace -- 1517 ~ 74 ~ -77204

Traveller's Wagon -- 1493 ~ 64 ~ -77233

Smeltery -- 1565 ~ 70 ~ -77195

Stables and Pasture -- 1529 ~ 79 ~ -77208

Militia Camp -- 1481 ~ 63 ~ -77241

Player House 1 -- 1517 ~ 78 ~ -77225

Player House 2 -- 1528 ~ 93 ~ -77216

Capital Building -- 1533 ~ 68 ~ -77235

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Smithy -- 1565 ~ 70 ~ -77195

 



Last edited by KevinF1ash - Thu Aug 6, 2020 1:33 am
TheSquidychicken
Regular
Posts: 24
Posted on Tue Aug 11, 2020 5:24 pm

Capital: Denied; The exterior looks quite good, although the interior is lacking; there are many empty areas and some parts where the flooring becomes the same material as the roof and walls. 

Traveler Wagon: Denied; I would recommend using a differrent wood type for this so it doesnt blend with the rest of your build, also, its quite cold in forodwaith, maybe add some sides to block out that chilly wind.

MarketPlace: Denied; I like the concept, but I think it feels too cramped, maybe a few more stalls, or a little bit of a more open room

Smeltery: Accepted; Although the floor is still the same brick as the walls and ceiling, and there are torches all over the place I would say fix those two things.

Training Camp: Approved

Player Housing: Approved

Pasture and Stables: Denied; Seems fairly unfinished, the pasture also is a bit too small, and to be honest it feels placed strangely and not accessible to animals

Overall Opinion: I like the city, most of the denials are small fixes, so good luck!

Overall: Denied