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I am HadesZues and I want to apply for lordship.
I have worked on all requirements and I would really like to contribute to the server by being a lord.
The coordinates of my base are x98544 :; z:58397 .
Last edited by Presence10 - Tue Apr 24, 2018 11:42 am
Review on 04/11/2018
Mine; Requirement Met
Stable - Requirement Met
Barracks - Requirement Met
Entire base is a Stronghold - Requirement Met
i have some upgrades for my countship
The quality of the Healer's Hut drastically needs to be improved. Its just a Mordor Brick box.
I have made the upadates and made the quality better to the healers hut
I see you added some pillars and fire. But the hut itself is still constructed of 1 material and lacks the same quality as the rest of the build. Minding the fact the rest of the build was not yours but the quality needs to be about the same.
Try adding a door; some bars for windows, an Orc Bed, and Table of some sort where they would practice their craft.
Healer's Hut: 9x9 building size; [Only 1 Per Count]
- Somewhere to cook, Bed, Table, some storage [Can all be in one room]. Includes Herbs and medicines about
- Benefit: 1 CNPC Healer; Rapidly heals anyone who comes into her tent.
- Upgrades: None
in have made inporvemts to the healing hall and have finished the church its cords are x:98454 y:58360
Accepted Healers Hut; As I helped you with it to sort of lead you into what is expected. If you build like this it will look awesome!
Church will need to be redone.
i have redone the church and i have dont the barracks upgrade it is attached to the orginal one
You need to put up coordinates [Helpful if they are in format [XXXX YY ZZZZ].
church cords are X:98454 Y:102 Z:58358 and barracks cords are X:98545 Y:102 Z:58357 the officer pathes are marked with cherry wood planks
i have built the following
Knight's guild X: 98474 Y: 102 Z: 58315
Knight"s estate X98486 Y102 Z 58315
The room these are built in is a giant square... The entrance of which is also meh. I would consider having this place attached to the fortress already built into the wall rather than what looks like a stripped mined chamber.
The builds are also very rectangular and only meet the size requirement because of the wall. While this is fine the insides of both structures is barebones and needs some decor. The layout of both also needs to be improved.
My tip; look up online of DND blueprints for suggestions into what a Guild looks like or what a Knight's Estate could be. Typically I would imagined a fortified house as a good starting point.
i have redone the knigt's guild at X: 98474 Y:102 Z: 58315
and the Knight's estate X: 98486 Y: 102 Z: 58315
I would like to see a lot more decoration for the Knight's Estate. It just seems empty; what would an Orc want in his estate? Maybe add some more items about, storage, etc.
The Knights Guild is missing sparring rooms, and I would suggest private rooms nearby. Its a Guild so I would also look up what Guilds had in medieval days.
I would say each place needs more decoration; theyre both largely square and dull. Consider adding more floors to each place, some nice hallways, and a bit more interesting designs.