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I am an old player and have finally created a kingdom I'm working on and it would be alot cooler and easier for me to keep on building if I became count.
Last edited by Presence10 - Mon Sep 24, 2018 4:36 pm
First Impression: I adore that you build WITH the tree itself. So many players use the massive trees but do not go with the branches. I give you an A+ on that and the build itself while using a lot of wood looks and feels Lothlorien. It does feel like a home in the trees.
A lot of this will be Red for failed; but do not be discouraged. The build looks good and a few minor tweaks and you'll be good to go!
2 Player Houses; You need two areas; even seperate trees nearby would do. Of at least 17x17 for player homes. They just need a banner and walkway there.
Marketplace; Its a tad small; add another 1-2 booths of simular size and add something to tell in the ones you will control.
Smeltery; I did not really see a proper smeltery; I would make a small area on the ground for a forge and some stockpile for ores.
Pasture; Need an area; really just fence in some natural area nearby the stables you built and should be fine.
Training Camp; The build still shows dirt in places where I think you meant to put pillars. The size itself does not lend to any spot the guards can sleep. The targets are just right in front of them as well? That seems not helpful when they can hit it with a sword XD. I would consider adding a place for them to sleep; fixing the dirt int he build; and moving the targets further back.
Capital Building; Treehouse itself will be considered the Capital.
2 Player Houses; Still need 1 area more; Or I am missing it. Will err on my side.
Marketplace; Much nicer! Really love it
Smeltery; Place a little area nearby or next to it where you can put the ores in. Like a storage area.
Pasture; Still a bit small; make it bigger but thats an easy fix.
Training Camp; Approved
Capital Building; Approved
Active Player; Approved
Request for CNPC:
Vegetable Patch: x:54639 z:20991 y:120
Smithy: x:54622 z:21006 y:72
Stables: x:54602 z:20980 y:72
When posting the Coordinates; just do 54622 72 21006. Makes it much much easier. Who does XZY and not XYZ!?
Vegetable Patch: Approved